in the lake of forgotten memories

another look on my tormented life...

 sitting alone within my dark room..

with silence covering the place...

nthn i can feel but...

this lonliness is all around me...

sitting alone... with no one around...

but the shadows of a lost memory..

roaming around me.. 

with nothin to hide.. and nthn to cover..

drinking of the ice glass..

refreashing the memories..

of the hidin past..

suddenly the glass fall over..

and leaving nthn but..

ice shrouds.. 

and a memoried from the dead past...

walking alone in my long path

seeking my shelter from ths shadows..

that torture me every time i need to sleep..

with nightmare i had to figh.. 

the endless nigthmares i am havin here..

reached the lake...

all covered with clouds..

the clouds of my fears..

which no one can baer..

but i had to fight..

i took a swim into the lake of fears..

looking for a small memory..

to give me the hope..

that i lost long time ago...

swimming while am suffering...

the water is cold... with the frozem memories..

of the dead past.. 

stings me like a shroud of that ice glass..

rewind the tape of my life...

with every singel moment..

after all i realized...'

that all my life i spent alone..

playin hide and seek with my friend...

but nvr mannaged to find him...

he lost.. but still can search..

within the lake which its no where..

swimming till i lost my sight..

within the clouds of my eternal fears..

drowning into my lake ...

with this frozen memories..

stings like a shrouds of the broken ice glass.

 

Reviews

[waleed blacko]

well thnx for passing by and review my poem ..and am glad u liked it..

[Michelle Long]

I like this.
It's eerie, and dark, and sends the picture in which you were trying to interperate.
"rewind the tape of my life...
with every singel moment..
after all i realized...'
'that all my life i spent alone.."
This section, in particular, is quite creative.
Nice job! =]