No Farewell, No Goodbye

I wrote this poem when I was thinking about ghosts one day.

No Farewell, No Goodbye

 

I see you walk around

I see you talk aloud

How come I can't touch you?

How come you fade away?

Why can't I hug you, for the whole entire day?

I want to tell you I love you

Tell you not to go

Tell you to stay here, with me, and my face will be aglow

But, if you must leave, if you must go

Just please, God, let me say "hello"

No, wait, where are you going?

Don't leave, don't go

Come back, please

Or I'll be all alone

Author's Note

Please, please, please let me know what you think! I appreciate constructive criticism, but not rude remarks.

Reviews

[For my life I write]

rude remarks? it's really good... very deep and makes me think.