Love

I am getting over serious Writer's block. And I know this (what I have just written) is not even a poem.

"Love is a potion.

Spiteful, yet sweet

All~at the same time..."

Author's Note

I am learning. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Perfect use of words and thoughts. You made your point. Thank you Ghania for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ghania]

Thank you so much, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ghania.

[poetgurl]

So very beautiful,
I like this write and the picture used.

[Ghania]

Thank you do much for your words here. =)

[An owl on the moon]

You seem to know love so well, and your words confess the depths of it, the flow of it, the tenderness and fierceness of it. So good to be reading your words again, dear friend.

[Ghania]

Thank You So much, Craig.
It's always good to have your words here. :)

[An owl on the moon]

I am so thankful you got over your writer's block! :)

[Ghania]

ha ha! Yes. I am relieved. I had to write a full-length story to get over it. I am happy now. :P

[An owl on the moon]

A full-length story? I must find this and I'll be happy too. :D

[Ghania]

Oh thanks. But I won't publish it here. ;P

[Ghania]

Glad to find you encouraging always. :))

[An owl on the moon]

Ah! Well, I guess I will just have to imagine what the story would be. :)

[Ghania]

Ha ha. You're so humble and a great, great person.
God bless You💕.

[An owl on the moon]

Dear you! You are a great, great friend. May God's blessing rest on you. 💕

[Ghania]

Thanks a ton😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, love is that and more, so aptly said...
While I know this is a haiku what you wrote, I think 'and yet' isn't grammatically correct. 'and' here is unnecessary. Maybe write it as a quote or in a single line. The impact doesn't change btw ;) :)

[Ghania]

Thank you for pointing it out Yumna.
Um, it's the edited one. When I first wrote this, it was
it's spiteful, yet sweet.

Thank you for your constructive review.
Can you please guide me what should I write then? I'll appreciate that. :P

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hm maybe you should write it as a single quote or this way:

"Love is poison,
spiteful... yet sweet.
All ~ at the same time..."

Don't consider it as a haiku. The lines hold meaning. That's what matters more :)
And of course, you can disregard my suggestions too ;)
You're welcome 😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I love the pic btw :))

[Ghania]

Thank you Yumna. The way you wrote it, was the way I wrote it.(intially) And I am really more comfortable with that. I'll make the changes then.😊😊

[Ghania]

O yes! The pic.❤

[Relic]

I can understand your feelings. Many feel this way being love can be like a two way street. It can go one way, then suddenly change direction leaving us bitter and angry. That's the way life is sometimes.

[Ghania]

There are always different perspectives and sides to everything. That is what makes everyone different. Like, red symbolizes love, somewhere it depicts warning, somewhere it's blood.
Thank you for your thoughtful review, Relic. :)

[Rusteangi Ruba]

dear frnd,
its really awesome about ur work.the picture was the main attraction/i really loved ur work.keep well;
by rj

[Ghania]

Thanks a lot, Rajashree!! It means a lot. :)

[Ghania]

Oh yes, a picture speaks a thousand words, you know. :P

[Rusteangi Ruba]

THAT WAS AMAZING..

[Ghania]

:")))) 💓💓

[Najam Us Saher]

Love is a poison
It is spiteful and yet sweet
All at the same time.
If you make the above changes, it will be a perfect haiku (5 7 5 syllables)

[Ghania]

Oh, thank you so much for your kind advice, i'll make the changes. :)))))

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Hey, thank you for the author's note 😀
My spelling isn't correct there, it's Saher.

[Ghania]

oopsie! My apologies. I have a friend that shares the same name as you. I think I wrote the way she spells. Ha ha. Will do the changes. Don't mind. :P
And U're welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

It's okay, most of the people spell my name wrong. 😁

[Ghania]

ha ha. Really? Well, that won't be coming from my side again! Cuz I have always pronounced and spelled the names correctly. :P

[Ghania]

Don't worry.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah they often write a 'z' intead of 'j' in Najam. And pronounce my name incorrect too.

[Ghania]

How do you speak it in Hindi??

[Najam Us Saher]

It's difficult to write.
Na as in Knight jam as in Jump without a p

[Ghania]

han han! Mein bhi yehe soch rahi thee. LOL. It's the same in URDU. Well, the way you described tho, EPIC :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Hahahaha. Glad I could find suitable words which spell the same, I must learn phonotics to make my name spell correctly 😁

[Ghania]

Ha ha. You must now. LOL. :)
I think I have to too. :P