Losing

Losing

A Story by Ghania
"

Just thinking

"
Fear of losing.
Losing oneself.

One's faith,
inner contentment
and love. 

Losing oneself - 
is ~ horrible ...

© 2017 Ghania


Author's Note

Ghania
I wish I may never lose the aforementioned.

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I agree with your message & you have written this with much feeling. I like the details you include, like losing faith & contentment. But this does not sound like someone who has actually lived thru this experience. It sounds like someone who never wants to know what this feels like. In other words, your message could be expanded to show more about how this happens or how this feels. But as a simple statement, your message is true & easily understood (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

6 Years Ago

Oh yes! Very rightly pointed out. I have never really gone through that. It was just, what came to .. read more



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I think the sense of fear in this is what proves you are aware of what truly matters and hold these things in high regard. Many people lack this sense of self. Very good read once again! Simply put but well defined.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. Britebeth. :)
You are wise my friend. All you've mentioned, I believe, are interconnected. Some people drift along with no centered place in their hearts. Poor them.

Nicely said, Nerdy. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

7 Years Ago

Thanks Relic. :)

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Added on September 17, 2017
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Ghania
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Rawalpindi , Punjab, Pakistan



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