Your eyes see the depth of God's mercy and grace, the beauty of the world given to us, and that grows within us as we awaken to the wonder of our spirituality. There is comfort, there is peace, there is joy, and as more awaken to what you have felt and seen and know, perhaps there will be more peace in the New Year, dear poet.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thanks for your lovely review.
Happy New Year, my dearest friend. =)
6 Years Ago
Happy New Year, dear Ghania! May it shine so bright every day for you. :)
Thank you for expressing your faith with truth about the merciful nature of The Almighty Creator of Heaven and Earth, the Maker of the sun and moon and the air that we breathe.
Your eyes see the depth of God's mercy and grace, the beauty of the world given to us, and that grows within us as we awaken to the wonder of our spirituality. There is comfort, there is peace, there is joy, and as more awaken to what you have felt and seen and know, perhaps there will be more peace in the New Year, dear poet.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thanks for your lovely review.
Happy New Year, my dearest friend. =)
6 Years Ago
Happy New Year, dear Ghania! May it shine so bright every day for you. :)
If it doesn't offend you, I think of this poem not from a religious point of view, but He, my Almighty is in this case my parents who do everything you write. They are my true Gods, and I love this poem because that's how I feel about my family!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
No offense Kate.😊😊 You're right. And I respect what you say. They, our Parents are really who .. read moreNo offense Kate.😊😊 You're right. And I respect what you say. They, our Parents are really who love us without anything in return. They are really Mighty.
Thanks for your thoughts here, Kate.😊😊
Spirituality is not only a gift but a necessity. Especially in today's world. There is a darkness that hides within all of us. We need spiritual protection to fight it.
Nice poem Nerdy. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thanks a lot, Relic. :)
Your reviews support me a great deal. Best wishes.
God is enough indeed. All the love, care and guidance is provided by him to those who humble themselves and seek Him. It gladdens Him when we turn to Him. An excellent penning.
I think the way you depicted your relationship with spirituality in this is wonderful. You knowing you have faulted at some point but knowing you will be given love and forgiveness regardless. Very good read!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your review, my friend. ;)
And yes, He forgives us no matter what. Love.. read moreThank you so much for your review, my friend. ;)
And yes, He forgives us no matter what. Loves us more than we can ever think of. And gives us more than we can ever thank Him for. :))
In this modern age of so much violence and violence itself committed in the name of God, true spirituality is now more important than ever before. For the spiritually and morally true are the one's that must bring the corrupted back into the light.
A piece of writing with honesty and faith at it's central core. That even the true can make mistakes themselves and still be forgiven if they seek redemption. Nice work.
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7 Years Ago
True indeed. He is the Forgiver. And if you seek, He's always there. In this age, people mostly find.. read moreTrue indeed. He is the Forgiver. And if you seek, He's always there. In this age, people mostly find refuge in spirituality when they feel down, to assuage the anguish of their sorrows.
Thank you for your review. :)))
spirituality always comes for our help in times of needs.
you brought out beautiful aspects in faith and belief, setting an example of your religion and the goodness that comes with it
this was a very well written poem.
however i feel in the first stanza you could replace the word 'cared' with something else like 'i ignored, He listened' or something similar
'cared' being read twice kinda hinders in the flow and becomes a lil redundant
otherwise overall this was beautiful just as the message was
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7 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Pia.
Especially for pointing out a big thing.
I really appreciate .. read moreThank you so much, Pia.
Especially for pointing out a big thing.
I really appreciate your constructive review. I was going to edit it before but couldn't find time. I was thinking to replaced it with "consoled".
But your seems quite suitable. I will edit it.
Thanks again.
Tracing the things and memories from the backyard of emotions.
Very friendly.
Floating in the sea of my own thoughts and soaking them into the ink of my hand to pen down all of them.
A biblio.. more..