Venomous Bloodlust

A story about my creepypasta

I used to be a regular girl now I crave the blood of my enemy's which lets face it all of you are my enemy's your just waiting to strike me but I'll strike you first. Here is what happened to me I was on a camping trip with my brother. He was the only family I had left our mom and dad were gone so it was me and him. We had planned this for weeks and it was happening but the bad thing was it was my brother who messed it up it was a party and every one but me got drunk not surprised it was no fun but after every one was wasted tell they fell asleep or gone I wanted to go for a walk but that's when the bad part came I was bitten by a snake I screamed lucky for me a hunter was near by and heard me he found the snake and killed it said it was not poisonous and asked why I was out here at this time of night? I told him I was with family and should get back once I turned around he grabbed me and said " how you going to get back when your dead " he soon toke his knife and cut it over my face and across my eye when he stabbed me in my back and down I went and felt the most amazing thing I tasted my own blood that was all I needed when I got back up he was the one on the ground he looked like a shriveled up little nothing how perfect and his blood tasted good but I was still hungry so I was now on the hunt just as my victim... And guess who's my next victim... YOU

Author's Note

Sorry if I messed up

Reviews

[Malister Mikey]

A chilling tale, good job on this

[Amber Lily]

No need to even apologize for your work! Grammar and spelling mistakes happen. I would suggest though that you insert periods and commas just to make it easier for someone reading to follow along.

As for the story it's great! I'm a creepypasta fan as well, and I felt like this definitely fit into that category. Bloody stories are the best.

Feel free to send me read requests I enjoy a good horror story :)

[dw817]

Wow, someone is definitely into blood. While I can't claim the same there is an altruistic mixed bag of metaphors, meanings, and personages aboard Writer's Cafe. You should do just fine.

Thanks for the earlier friend request. :)

[Nerdlige]

thanks i like your work

[dw817]

Well every Saturday I post a video, movie, or videogame - which will be tomorrow. Hope to see you there ! :7

[Nerdlige]

What do u mean? When u say see u there?

[dw817]

http://bit.ly/1p8l3KH

[Nerdlige]

Huh?

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

There's a few grammar mistakes in this piece, but other then that it's really good. I enjoyed this write, nicely written. :-)

[Nerdlige]

Thanks I really like writing Creepypastas

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Kayja Symphious]

You don't need to apologize L.C. Writing is an art, one that will never be perfect. True, there are faults in this piece, and you know it, but for now I wish to deal with just one of those.

This is a rushed piece, I know this because I do the same thing. With that in mind, I hope you will edit this work, and explain your awakening with more thought and detail. How did you feel, seeing all the partygoers abusing their gift of life and happiness?

No one likes to rework something, I least of all, but this story has great potential. It deserves to be heard.

[Nerdlige]

Thanks ill work on it