Do you love me check yes or no

Creepypasta of my character lovely Ashely hope you like it

It's so hard with them always hanging around I always hear them say the same thing "yes, no, yes, no check" that's all they ever say but one day it was different. It was Friday when it happened I got a letter all the girls in the class said ohm I'm not the prettiest girl but that's what happens in school all the letter had was a smiley face on it and said do you love me check yes or no and meet me out side by the trees signed JTK. I had no idea who JTK was or meant but in the end it had a heart I had a love letter for the very first time a love letter me. Five minutes later there was the bell I missed my bus to see this mystery guy who wrote me a love letter i was excited after me waiting 45 minutes outside thinking  he was not coming someone or thing finale emerged from the shadows i turned to look but quickly it covered my mouth  and wrestled me to the ground and said "i see you got my note too bad you thought it was a love letter and you did not think it was a killers note all well" he stabbed me in the eyes tell he felt no life in me. Hours later i awoke somehow i could see i heard them say "killer kill, killer kill" i had a note in my pocket i was going to give to Alex west before i died but in good help of the creator gave me a second chance here he was all alone i lade the note on the bench close to him they quickly taped his shoulder he turned and saw the note picked it up and opened it read "Do you love me check yes or no and then my name" i somehow felt him check no so i quickly came to him and asked "why no never say no NEVER" i soon attacked him banging his head ageist the ground he was dead i was already dead now i was "the lovely KILLER

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[Kayja Symphious]

There are many mistakes in this, of course, but the concept is AWESOME!

You have a real knack for stories!