Ruins

Just a short old poem :)

My dreams are all ruins of blood,
Drenched in sorrow and pain,
I wrap my heart in dreams of tomorrow,
The dreams of everlasting summer ,
Rain falls upon the face of tomorrow,
Drenching the dreams of summer,
Summer is nothing but a dream,
Tomorrow will always be wrapped in mist,
The mist of a lonely heart.

Reviews

[Sunny Pace]

I like it. It's short, but it has a lot of mystery to it and can be interpreted and felt in many different ways. As for grammar and spelling I see no issues there, and I can't say I have any criticism on this. It's very well done.