We are Forever

In your eyes there is

A light I’ve seen before

It glows like a flame

Whispering softly

We are forever

Even as the body withers

And slowly turns to dust

The light in your eyes

I will see again

Every time I see you

I will know

That it is you

I will feel

That it is you

Your heart always beats

Inside my chest

As my heart always beats

Inside your chest

Your light will always be the same

We are forever

Author's Note

Any feedback is appriciated

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

it started off really Grait!! But it needs something bothersome to much repetition perhaps I can understand why you use it,its just from a reader perspective after the second verse of feeling the straight flow it slows down maby like your heart beat :) that's all I have to say but Grait wright :)

[Kristine]

Thanks for your feedback! :) I will keep this in mind for later writings ;)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Awesome glad I could help!! You have so much potential,you have a crafty-arty way of right I enjoy lol

[Kristine]

aww, thank you! that's very kind of you :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

just being honest :) and I enjoy your work,brings,closure I think hmm :)