tbtf

Wrote this in a hot minute

Oh, sober me with those eyes

-From another night
   inebriated with
     lonesome crass

Give me that deep breath
and then knock it right out of me

Ignite infatuation,
   fan the flames
     and walk the embers

You do it so easily...

Dressed in black and white photography
contrasting that sexual tone

too beautiful to f**k
too wild to love

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Damn! Lovely poetry, Shane...the ending had that kick...'too beautiful to f*ck, too wild to Love'...awesome write!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Well, "in about a hot minute" seems to work well for you. I have to say this might be one of my favorites from you, Shane! Love the entire piece, from beginning to end...and the last lines really made me grin; well used language and tone.

Dressed in black and white photography
contrasting that sexual tone -- Love, love, love these lines...really. Truly shows a vivid image.

You need to do more of this "quick" writing; it suits you. Emotionally honest and technically beautiful.

[Shane William]

Well thanks, I'll try. I need more idle nights like tonight to pick at my own brain.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Please do... :)