Cry

Cry

A Poem by Kitsune-

Im by myself

I stand in gloom

Mocked by shadows

Teased by tears

I dont want them to fall

But they just drop

They have somewhere to go

But nowhere to stop

Thats it

I cant stand it

I give up

 

© 2008 Kitsune-


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The point of it is, Sometimes you cant stop the tears from falling. Every now and then you need to cry to let your feelings out.

Posted 16 Years Ago


The sadness in the story is not the best in my opinion. The poem in my opinion is not that best, since it is a bit typical on the cafe. Sorry no hate! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kitsune-

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