It's The Same Night

Sleepless Again, my mind is running away

You know those times, Right?

The ones where you can't sleep at night,

Your head won't stop, it's flowing

and you can't stay still, the thoughts are growing.

You need an escape, but you can't stop from noticing

the shadows are creeping in, they're floating

right above your head, they're consuming you. 

Everyone you've lost or letdown, making you rue.

I can't stop having those nights.

They're making me feel that I have made no rights. 

I'm losing my mind

I'm losing my mind

and that's how I go

my mind breaks it's flow

I drift off to sleep

with the tears still on my cheek.

I'm sorry.

Author's Note

I'm having one of those nights again, sorry for any mistakes, feel free to call me out on them. Criticism welcome.

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

Is that an apology to yourself? Did you accept it? Splendid writing......you captured the consequences of insomnia well :)

[Amused Penguin]

If you can replace "its" with "it is" then it needs an apostrophe. Such as in your title. :-)

That's the only rule for "its". Keep up the writing, and I hope you get to sleep.