Long Distance 1

The first part of an LDR

My heart slowly healing 

Yet the thirst it has 

Quivering 

To find 

To love 

To hold?

But your miles away 

Calling every now and then 

but still not everyday

And as the glass window breaks 

and your pierced from head below 

The tears in your eyes swell

bringing them to a flow

The picture frame is broken 

At the shop now being fixed 

You threw it in your sleep 

While dreaming about he 

Your heart is almost healed now 

But the clock is always ticking 

Days to months continue 

Miles away your voice blooms

I hear you on the phone 

The smile it brings like stone...

Hopefully you return 

Sometime

Somewhere

Somewhat soon...

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Long distance romance seldom works in my opinion. I guess it’s ok short term, so much can be said romantically, but without a loving touch, I can’t help feeling it is doomed masked writer. I felt frustration in this write.

Chris

[Masked writer]

If I may be honest Chris...

It is so frustrating, almost weekly... But whenever he comes back, and I see him again like I did last time, I will cherish every moment, and I do hope that in time the distance between us closes again like it once did....

[Chris Shaw]

I hope so for your sake. I hope your wishes come true:)

[Masked writer]

I as well..Him and his mom said they'll be making a visit over the summer....I'll probably write about it...They called yesterday

[Chris Shaw]

Nice to know a visit is planned :)

[Masked writer]

indeed so...my father says its a surprise
Thankyou Chris for your opinions..They are always welcome

Cheers..
Masked writer

[Poetic Beauty]

Long diatance is hard to maintain. It can be emotionally draining and mentally as well. It’s not easy but if two people love each other it can happen only if there is a plan to be closer at some point

[Masked writer]

This is true..But it does indeed help when they call or are closer to you.

[Poetic Beauty]

It does help to call and text a lot

[Masked writer]

exactly

cheers
M.w