We're In Love

The sun shines brightly
Like how my eyes look at you
The skies don't look blue
When I'm with someone like you.
You bring out the best in me.

Birds joyfully sing
Like how my heart sings for you.
Trees happily swing
When they see us together.
Together we'll live with joy.

Stars merrily glow
Like how your eyes gleam for me.
The moon looks at us
When we look at it above.
Does that moon know we're in love?

Reviews

[Wild Rose]

Just read your comment on another writers work

Now read this one of yours

This is a nice short poem > what/where is paradise It is where we make it to be

Keep writing my dear > You will improve - only by writing

Tell us about the Phillipines > to me that would be like paradise

I do write about my paradise > Sitting in the garden

[Nelyn Salvaleon]

Thank you!😘😘

[Wild Rose]

You are welcome