Someone

I'm falling, wanting someone to catch me
'Cause the one I'm falling for isn't willing to catch me
Is there anybody else who's willing to save me?

I'm crying, wishing someone to wipe my tears
'Cause the one I'm crying for isn't crying for me
Is there anyone else who's crying for empathizing me?

I'm thinking, hoping someone to enter my mind
'Cause the one I'm thinking of isn't thinking of me
Is there somebody else who's thinking of loving me?

I'm dreaming, waiting for someone to wake me up
'Cause the one I'm dreaming of isn't dreaming of me
Is there someone else who's dreaming to be with me?

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Hm?
Well, Nelyn Dear,

It's said, "Love finds us when least expected; and, most often, when we're not even looking." Sooo, could be someone out here has been dreaming of you more than you might know. It's always a good idea to keep your dreams and fantasies alive and smiling, eh? ; )

I really enjoy the way you've gathered your verses into three neat lines each, with spot-on line breaks, smoothly expressed feelings, and passionate emotions that draw a reader to you, within your moments.

Love the honest title and open-hearted sharing … keep dreaming, Nelyn ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Nelyn Salvaleon]

This is quite embarrassing for me like "am I really this desperate to look for someone?" But now I've realized that it's better to wait even if it takes too long to find the one that's perfect for me, but if there's none, I'll gladly accept that I'm destined to be single forever, because now I believe in destiny. If you're destined to be with the one you love, it'll come in the right time, but if you're destined to be alone, just smile, because it doesn't mean the world will end, it means you're strong and independent.
To you, dear Richard, thank you for the compliment and for your brilliant review!!!

[Richard🖌]

Dear Nelyn,
You are more than warmly welcome … it my pleasure to read you and share your thoughts, emotions, and feelings. : )

[Mr. D]

Catch yourself. It is much less painful in the end...

[Nelyn Salvaleon]

Indeed! Thank you!!

[Mr. D]

No problem