Many Thing I Am

Standing, Plain sight, Watching me with

Eagle eyes

In the Darkness of my eye, Changing Faces

Waiting for the Perfect Moment.

A rat Sneaking Around.

Always ready to act, attack, unnoticed.

Single or Together, they get their prey

Death doesn’t scare them. They Just Help HIM.

This is our life

Love may walk passed

In reach, but never close

This is my life, to wield myself

unto this

Reviews

[Melinda Weber]

I like the title because it fits the poem.... not that i didn't enjoy reading it, it just has a lot going on! It makes me feel anxious lol i think if you stuck with one emotion at a time, and explained it stanza's, id have a better idea of what the poem is actually about. But i did enjoy it, and well done =)

[Daenerys]

I love how you described everything
However there are grammatical errors, but it's your poem
I really enjoyed this