WHO IS SHE?

WHO IS SHE?

A Poem by NellyDreams
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A DEDICATION TO MY FUTURE WIFE, EXPRESSING WHAT SHE IS TO ME....

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SHE IS MY QUEEN
MY HOPE AND MY DREAM.
SHE IS MY WISH UPON A STAR
MY BIGGEST FAN THUS FAR.
SHE IS MY FAVORITE CELBRITY
MY SUPPORT TEAM MADE JUST FOR ME.
SHE IS MY BRIGHTEST LIGHT
MY WRONG AND MY RIGHT.
SHE IS MY BEST FRIEND
MY TRUTH AND LIFELONG COMPANION.
SHE IS THE ONE I'VE WAITED FOR
MY SMILE AND MY FROWN BEHIND EVERY DOOR.
SHE IS MY EVERY BEAT OF MY HEART
MY BEGINNING AND END OF EVERY THOUGHT.
SHE IS THE SUCCESSOR OF MY BEING.
MY LEADER OF THIS DAILY STRUGGLE.
SHE IS MY FOCUS
MY ATTENTION.

© 2008 NellyDreams


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I like it very much .. it sort of ended abruptly for me ..maybe one last line .. something like , and this is cliche, my everything , or maybe my love , heart's desire .. something of your choosing or leave it as is if you like it ..

I love the things you wrote that she is to you .. sounds like love ..

Chloe
xoxo

Celbrity... celebrity ...

Good poem ..@

Posted 16 Years Ago


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NellyDreams
NellyDreams

Chocolate City, DC



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She grew up not knowing what was to come of her future. Well at the age of 13, she began writing poetry. She was a member of her Jr. High Schools Literary Club. She took pride in her work and finally .. more..

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