L.O.V.E.

L.O.V.E.

A Poem by Nic E
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Poem using acronyms

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Why is it that we all just can’t LOVE?

Truly LOVE
 
That is:
 Lean On Virtue Effectively
 
If we could only do this then would we be able to see thing as they really are.
We would think of relationships (whether romantic or otherwise) as a safe haven, a place where we can speak a:
 Language Of Various Emotions
 
We would not be so quick to treat this gift as a mere situation or a place in our lives that our:
  Legs Open Very Easy.
 
We would instead be able to:
 Look Observe Verify & Enjoy
the things and people that we truly care about.
 
Then and only then will we make:
  Living Our Values Everyday
a reality and not a fantasy
 
Believing that by subsisting any other way would surely be a:
  Loss Of Valuable Energy

I’m learning to put my trust in others,although it's hard to:

Let Our Vulnerability End

LOVE maybe an inanimate thing but it is the only way we will avoid:
  Lots Of Violent Emotions
 
So just give LOVE a chance
  Let Our Vital Energy -
Go forth; we will only grow to become a better person if we allow this to happen

 


 

© 2008 Nic E


Author's Note

Nic E
Please leave feedback, negative or positive, any feedback is allways good feedback. It helps me to develop. Hope you enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.

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this was so creative! i really enjoyed how you wrote this. and it flowed really well (which im sure was hard due to having to constantly think up new words that started with L, O, V, and E. I think it was very well done! It was true too.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. How very brilliant. I love this piece!! :) Great work. I love the style, with the um... what are those things called?! Well you know... the things where the letters in a word stand for something. lol. WHAT ARE THOSE THINGS CALLED?! I can't remember (lol), but great piece, nonetheless!!
KH

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it,,, I love to love a lot of people,, I guess I can because I am not tied down to a relationship, but even if I were I would continue to do so. Platonic love is a beautiful thing, I and I would hope my partner was the same with her friends... Very good write, I will favor this,,,
Like you say "So just give LOVE a chance" I think it could work on a wider scale, in any case it is worth a try...

Love
Me

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nic E
Nic E

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