Ever found yourself falling for someone who you didn't want to have feelings for?if you did,then this poem is for you.Its something short that can summarize complex feelings without loosing meaning.
I think this speaks volumes to many people. It talks about values and attitudes which can often be overlooked by people. I like this lines "Time to confess Time to deal what I feel for you is real." However I think that your grammer could be worked on. But overall great job on this poem!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
If you're speaking about the first word (Grammar) I think that was a test letter for the font size. .. read moreIf you're speaking about the first word (Grammar) I think that was a test letter for the font size. Great poem by the way imho.
9 Years Ago
Thanks,I appreciate the constructive reviews,keep them coming!
I think this speaks volumes to many people. It talks about values and attitudes which can often be overlooked by people. I like this lines "Time to confess Time to deal what I feel for you is real." However I think that your grammer could be worked on. But overall great job on this poem!
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
If you're speaking about the first word (Grammar) I think that was a test letter for the font size. .. read moreIf you're speaking about the first word (Grammar) I think that was a test letter for the font size. Great poem by the way imho.
9 Years Ago
Thanks,I appreciate the constructive reviews,keep them coming!