If...

For if I could linger in a perpetual dream,

Thou shalt always be in it.

For if thou ever tried to escape,

I shalt find a zillion reasons to make thee stay.

For if in reality thou can’t be mine,

At least in my dreams I can forever be thine.

Reviews

[zunie frost]

i like the last line ..
and nice title my friend !!
keep writing !!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Quite touchy...you ended this poem very strongly... the last line was the best part of this sweet and emotional piece... good work....

[Neha Sharma]

Thank you. :)

[iamshadowine]

wow! this is a really amazing piece of poem! love it! :) keep writing

[Neha Sharma]

Thank you. :)