Who is 'Me'?

Who is 'Me'?

A Poem by supernova_thoughts
"

Me that's two

"
I understand
When you say
It's not pretty

I understand 
When you declare
You want to be free

I understand 
That it's 
Sometimes exhausting

Yet
What greater power
Can remove me 
From me
Other than HIM?

So now
I understand
That its okay
Okay to be me
The who I am
The who I'll be

© 2022 supernova_thoughts


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Hello! :)
This reads like a commitment to give yourself some peace. I think it's a great idea. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wonderful write ;-} Enjoy the read. Believing in yourself, following your own path.

Posted 2 Years Ago


supernova_thoughts

2 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by!
This poem has nice cadence. You and yourself found a third to join you both. What better to write about than what we know and believe.

Posted 2 Years Ago


supernova_thoughts

2 Years Ago

Thank you William for the review!
I have been like this since junior year of high school, when I finally decided that making decisions based on what everyone else thought...stupid...and confusing.
Like me for me, not for me being what you expect.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


supernova_thoughts

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts, J.
Yes! It is okay to be you!! March to your own music and be an individual. I never liked being with the "herd" so, was usually off by myself but, I had my followers who liked me for me and not because I was like everyone else. You do you and be happy about it! This was a good read for me. Thank you. Temp

Posted 2 Years Ago


supernova_thoughts

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, Temp. Those who really like you will like you in all the shades. Take care!
Temperance

2 Years Ago

Yes they will!
We all want to know what we are , not be measured up by the wrong people

Posted 2 Years Ago


supernova_thoughts

2 Years Ago

True that! But why pay attention to what others say? Especially the people who think they know you b.. read more
Stuart Munro

2 Years Ago

I don’t do people so I never make a mistake

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Added on July 11, 2022
Last Updated on July 11, 2022
Tags: myself, true, love, life, identity, trouble, poem, poetry

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