I became insane

I'm my Healer and also my pain,
Yaa sometimes I become insane.

Some never notice your voice,
And some even listen ur vein.
It was not always the person,
About which I used to complain.
It was just me,
Yaa it was me again.

Start my journey daily,
And it meets its end again and again.
So what?
it's my journey and I'm my train.

Think only what have I lost,
Even when I have a lot to gain-
So what if it's a pain.

It's impossible to be sane,
Without ever being insane.
I'm my Healer and also my pain,
Yaa sometimes I became insane.

Neha

Reviews

[keith]

interesting this piece is with the difference in stanza lines as well the change up in rhyme ...
each line
every other line
staggered rhyme
each line
reads well with good continued flow
an introspective piece offering the contrast of opposites ... what's good is also not so good
well done

[Neha samant]

Thank you..