Vampire

Below dark sullen sky
Motion ceases, air freezes
Vampire roars, dripping blood fang looms

Reviews

[Zoya Sahai]

Its wonderful Neha! You really chose the right words and created the perfect blend. Very well written. :)

[Neha Godambe]

Thanks Zara :) Glad you read!

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Omg......Is it you.....?/ loved it indeed much....not loved.i think i liked + loved = felt your words.......these are really very so powerful i'd say...i love to read these short kinda words, quotations/quotes....loved it...you know what "last line has made an impact on me."...i think it's your first writing that ive read out *& you just did impressed me at all....i think i became Neha's fan.....(even i'm a biggest fan of Katerina in female's :))
but now you've impressed me & by your writings i'm your fan. Here's lots of writers whose fan i'm, & you're the another one i think....Anyway, loved your words much....
& note o you, write as same furthur poerty's/quotations, bcoz...........i really love much to read short one's only.....beautiful write...... A pat on your back from me "Neha"............do you know what's the meaning of Neha....if don't......then have a look below........
Neha words means "cheerful"........
Well written .......you've got some talent i can say by your writing........

[Neha Godambe]

Thanks a tons for the appreciation Akshat :) I am glad!