this is a lovely poem. Especially loved 'when an ugly charmed a charmer... fall apart' stanza...
the charmer beholds beauty in his beast... so does Beauty(of the beauty and the beast) in hers, despite how the beasts are perceived by everyone else ... amazingly portrayed :)
So true, yet most of us - mortals - try to perceive the physical side of it only! It takes wisdom, for which one has to learn from life - one's and others' , and for that it needs experiences of failure! Enjoyed reading this poem with thoughts. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Life is a never-ending learning process. Thanks for reading it Nayan :)
this is a lovely poem. Especially loved 'when an ugly charmed a charmer... fall apart' stanza...
the charmer beholds beauty in his beast... so does Beauty(of the beauty and the beast) in hers, despite how the beasts are perceived by everyone else ... amazingly portrayed :)
I appreciate your depth of thoughts and amazing rhymes.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Amazing rhymes! thts a compliment! I normally struggle with rhymes. Glad I am. Thanks for your visit.. read moreAmazing rhymes! thts a compliment! I normally struggle with rhymes. Glad I am. Thanks for your visit :)
11 Years Ago
Thanks for the lovely response,Neha.
I am eager to read more of your work.
Cheers!
‘Beauty' conceived physical
Shows signs of mortality
Inner beauty seems biblical
Survives the soul of eternity
That is only too true. You have created a poem so pure and beautiful. A poem that shows the beauty lying in your heart compared to the outer beauty many poets describe. I look forward to seeing more of your writing ! :)
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