Sin

Sin

A Poem by Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes
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The problem with religion & the way people tend to twist it to justify their actions. To spread their opinions on love and hate. The contradiction religion has become from cults, the pope, and priests

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Jugement.

Hate filled hearts.

Snarling and spit filled active jaws.

Faces twisted with their goal.

“Sin! Sin! SIN!

Everything is a sin!

The existence of others -sin!

The difference of others -SIN!

Not this or that -S I N!

You’re wrong - We’re right. Always right.

That close minded mentality.

Those so called “bible thumpers” 

Are blinded by their hate

Their contradictions

How can one believe or be believed when hate is their only goal?

This is not what he has died for.

To have his name put in vein

To have an acidic taste on minds

Difference Race

SIN!

Different religion

SIN!

Not Catholic

You’re wrong - You’re a SIN!

Gay 

SIN!

God doesn’t love you!

God HATES HATES HATES

Fallacious.

Judgement filled hearts have blinded the ‘chosen’

There is no hate.

There is only love.

Flesh and Bone sacrificed.

So much love - How did they forget?

Sins washed before birth - Love never forgotten.

Children never forsaken

ALL children loved

Even  slanderers to his name.

Guidance is there 

Minds, hearts, ears, and eyes have to be washed and open.

Only then can they recieve.

God is love.

God is good.

God is there.

ALWAYS.

© 2020 Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes


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What I take from this humble, beautiful write is that belief is not static. It needs to be replenished, and there’s no way that can happen if the pathways are clogged with self-righteousness. That has nothing to do with why He sacrificed for us, not at all. Does exclusion or insularity deepen faith?

Very admirably presented here.

Adix

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes

3 Years Ago

Long time no see!! Thank you for your review!!



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Posted 3 Years Ago


Well hey there Stranger...👋🏻

Loved (not hate lol) hearing your take on such a subject. Can love be misguided? What do you think is the standard by which we find truth in love?

How fitting my latest writing is called Judgement 😎

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes

3 Years Ago

Hello Apollos!! How have you been? I do believe love can be misguided and manipulated. But at the en.. read more
Apollos

3 Years Ago

Doing great! Been writing like crazy lol

Yeah I gotcha 👌🏻

Hope y.. read more
we are all imperfect, but the real sin lies in how we treat others...that is where we make the mortal mistakes of hate, prejudice and judgment...towards others...we need to clean up our own yards.
a really poignant and powerful piece of writing.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes

3 Years Ago

Wow, thank you J! I appreciate your kind words and feedback.
I agree dear Nefertiti.
"God is love.
God is good.
God is there.
ALWAYS."
Jesus wanted love to conquer our world and today. We need to lead with kindness, concern and listen. Men twist the words of religion to suit their goals. Powerful and wonderful words shared my friend.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I appreciate your insight. I really do.
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome.
What I take from this humble, beautiful write is that belief is not static. It needs to be replenished, and there’s no way that can happen if the pathways are clogged with self-righteousness. That has nothing to do with why He sacrificed for us, not at all. Does exclusion or insularity deepen faith?

Very admirably presented here.

Adix

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes

3 Years Ago

Long time no see!! Thank you for your review!!

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Added on January 10, 2020
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Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes
Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes

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My writers name is a story in itself...Nefertiti is Egyptian for a beautiful women, Virtudes is Jamaican for blessed spirit and Ahmes is Egyptian for child of the moon. more..

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