Conceal

I had words stuck in my head so I jotted them down.

I am forced to deal

what I wish to conceal

there is no distraction 

to mask what is real.  

 . . . I can take a deal?

The life I live in is blinding

My heart still resigning 

the tears crawl down my face,

but I'm denial of crying 

Because . . . 

I am forced to deal

what I wish to conceal

there is no distraction 

to mask what is real. 

 . . . What's your reaction?

I have these thoughts

that I thought I forgot

releaving is something its not.

I look in  the mirror

the past behind me

the memories clearer,

but still something I wish not to see.

I am forced to deal

what I wish to conceal

there is no distraction 

to mask what is real,  

. . . What will it reveal?

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed it :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words.
"I am forced to deal
what I wish to conceal
there is no distraction
to mask what is real,
. . . What will it reveal?"
Above lines are two sided. Some parts of us needs to be concealed. Anger must be hidden. Anger solved no problem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sereenaoutloud]

Yes i enjoyed it lol this is a great write. Could be a great song too!

[Emily]

'I'm denial of crying '
Just something about this line I can't get over!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[child of God]

This is beautiful I did enjoy it thank you for sharing it was a pleasure to read

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write! Your focused stanza is killer:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

I love the meaning behind the piece but to be honest I dislike the use of rhyming as a poem I think this is more suited as song lyrics keep writing :)

[Octavious]

Thank you so much,and I agree with you on the rhyming, I think a song was stuck in my head as I was writing, but I have yet to remember it, but I know that this isn't the lyrics, just inspiration . . . I'm pretty sure, anyways, thank you :)

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

It's whatever you want it to be :) I personally think it would make a beautiful song

[Octavious]

Thank you :)