Front door !

Poem speaks for itself!

Front Door

Something about raindrops that collide with the pavement,

that drip that hits concrete leaving it blurry,

you knock upon my door asking me to let you in,

without checking the pep hole I did because I noticed you friend,

pass A handshake you became my soul mate,

you said I wont hurt, I wont bring tears but you did,

you're like the boy carved from wood cause you cried wolf to me over and repeatedly again

you ask to come back, that it wont ever happen again

but im standing strong like a statue, the door awaits

you might actually mean every word but that makes two of us

no need to fuss and wake the neighbors up,

looking at me passionately in my face saying I love you

emotions showing life and your eyes crying believe me

this sob story you selling comes with front row seats and everything

Its just Something about raindrops that collide with the pavement,

that drip that hits concrete leaving it blurry,

Its just Something about raindrops that collide with the pavement,

that drip that hits concrete leaving it blurry,

its just something about my tears that collide with the pavement,

that drip that hits the concrete leaving you blurry,

Reviews

[Carlton Carr]

Oh I like it very much. Are you a musician Nebraska because there is something very lyrical about your writig. As though you already have a melody in mind and it's playing in your head. Your images are lucid and surprisingly tender considering τђє subject matter. You are saying 'never again' but your heart is saying something else. Great write, thanks.

[Eddie Phillips]

Lyrically poetic and deeply moving. I enjoyed the thoughts in the piece. It really does explain itself.

[NebraskaHope]

Thank you so much !