T'is Better To Not Have Loved Than To Have Loved At All

T'is Better To Not Have Loved Than To Have Loved At All

A Poem by The Lovely Sound Of Crashing

Stuck in my heart,
Like a diamond in the form of a knife!
You'll be there forever,
Won't you love?
It wasn't good enough to
Just kill me from the inside!
You just had to tattoo,
Your name on the tip of my tongue!
That way I'll never forget
The bitterness!

A thousand apologies,
But a million regrets!
Why didn't I,
Watch where I stepped?
You caught me love!
You caught me, You really did!
And I've never felt so out of it!

Cause I'm living but dead,
Without you beside me!
And I'm losing my drive,
Crashing into insanity!
Is this what you wanted?
To keep me around your fingertips?
A puppet for your affection,
Oh darlin', You [love]=[kill] me the best!

 

You are the web that I cannot escape,

Led to you again and again,

As if you were fate.

You are the kiss,

That makes me a masochist.

You are my lust,

You are my BLOOD RUSH!

 

The type of romantic dysfunction in which:

T'is better to not have loved,

Than to love at all.

© 2008 The Lovely Sound Of Crashing


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Wow, I wrote a piece with similar basis but mine was more violent then this and had a worse outcome. But in both pieces I still don't know...love is dangerous no matter how you look at it. It can also be the one thing that is perfect in your life (when it's mutual) It's a hard question to answer but the more crap you go through the more you want to be loved or just love someone else. Great write

~~Theta

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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is it better to have not loved or to love and get hurt!! i like the way you wrote this. love is like a puzzle...its hard to figure out were each piece goes with out breaking it....or damaging the corners! hehe sorry...

i really like this...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I wrote a piece with similar basis but mine was more violent then this and had a worse outcome. But in both pieces I still don't know...love is dangerous no matter how you look at it. It can also be the one thing that is perfect in your life (when it's mutual) It's a hard question to answer but the more crap you go through the more you want to be loved or just love someone else. Great write

~~Theta

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this was great!
I've always pondered whether it is REALLY better to have loved and lost. I understand that it's better to have felt something than nothing, but when you're hurting really bad, you sometimes wish you were blissfully unaware that such love even exists!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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