Regrets Aren't Worth It!

KEEP RUNNING HOMIE!!!

As cold as ice,

No twinkle in that twilight.

All I knew was pain, all I knew was fight!

Never had flight,

Crashed out of humanities sight.

Entered a pit of darkness,

You couldn't find me with a flashlight!

My thoughts haunt me, like a geist!

If only I knew the price,

I wouldn't have fucked up, I would have did it right!

I would have done this,

I would have done that!

I would have loved her,

And I'm sure she would have loved back!

I would have saved face and had no need for a mask-

I wouldn't have a stamp of rejection; I'd have a platnium plaque!

I want to go back and keep my aura pure white,

But you're not allowed to live the same life twice!

And I'd say, "It's not fair!

I didn't learn these things earlier cause I didn't have anyone that cared!

I never knew about betrayals or the feelings I hurt!

It's not my fault I was treated with low worth!

Why does it feel like it's never gonna work...

Why does it feel like it's as valuable as dirt..."

But before I ask those questions outloud,

I shut the hell up...

Because I know now.

And now that I'm wiser,

And I know my path,

I walk toward the greener grass.

Cause even though I left a trail of destruction behind,

In view is a new life that I've been dying to find.

Even though it's not a time rewind,

It's salvation, and it makes it all fine.

Nomore decline through these rough times,

I'll embrace that light, it will be mine!

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jazlean]

"Because I know now.

And now that I'm wiser,

And I know my path,

I walk toward the greener grass.

Cause even though I left a trail of destruction behind,

In view is a new life that I've been dying to find."

I loves it! XD
Sometimes we all need to reflect and realise how far we have come and that how much we have taken from all our experiences. The only regret one should ever have is that they didn't learn from there past, but then it isn't really a regret because it is never too late to learn. Life is far from perfect and can be a real b***h sometimes, but from that as people we grow. And often it is from these bad times that we gain a better appriciation for what we do have.
another brilliant write my friend, well done.
~Jaz

[Bubo]

Great uplifting piece after being hurt.
You have such great rhyming in your writing, very lyrical and easy to read.

[thecoolone52]

it has a nice rhyme sceme... if you wana turn it into a song you would probably need a sick chorous but you could probably pull it off.... anyway courageous piece nice work

[Theta S. T.]

Wow!! This is great, such a strong piece your not holding back any kind of emotion on this one. I was reading this out loud and I had to stop myself I didn't realize I was screaming...lol I have to omit the flow of this piece makes it seem like a song. I still can't get over the raw emotion in this but regrets only make you wiser in the end ....great write

~~Theta

[Courtney Peters]

Is this a song?
I love it, its really strong. Good job ^^

[Wolfwind Words]

It sounds like a song to me. I think the story comes through clear. But
i'm not sure what the ultimate conclusion the poem was trying to make was?
I liked what was put down here. But something told my mind that there is another stanza left unwritten. but thats just me....
I think what it was was the end, i could see what you were growing out of and why you had found the light. But i'm not sure exactly what the light was.