Fix Yourself, Self!

A little self conversation type of poem...

Are you okay?

Far from it.

Feels like I'm plummetting.

Wheels aren't halting.

 

Could you be broken?

Would not doubt it.

Do you know how to fix it though?

Poo, of course not.

 

Never would be in this position if I did.

Clever with words, but not your emotions?

Suppose that's the best way to describe me.

Propose to misery yet?

 

Free from her you could never be.

She seems to be your mistress.

Because the ghost of my past haunt me,

Fuzz and static is all I know about the future.

 

Why don't you do something?

Cry and weep! Then move on!

Yet I have tried, over and over.

Regret is the cancer of me.

 

Well then don't let it kill you.

Hell is all in your head.

I will do my best...

Try again I must.

 

 

 

Author's Note

So I wanted to try something different and rhymed the beginning words instead of the ending words...

Reviews

[Jazlean]

great write, its unique and relateable. it works and those questions we ask ourselves..gah I know there pains too well.
another brilliant piece, but brilliant in its own right.
well done,
~Jaz

[PhoeniX]

hmmm.... a self telling piece. well written. hadn't read something like this before. nice read. good job. thanks for sharing.

[Morgan A Lynch]

this is awsome and so true.. it was like i was listening to you speek to ur self.. great job.

[Wolfwind Words]

I liked this, it was a window into that world that is our inner voices! Great Job!
I felt as if i was walking along with the words, have a conversation with them. Like a set of stairs. And the poem ended just before pushing out into the busy streets of life!

[Choosing Life]

I love it... I understand this as if I was speaking inside myself.. You really should read some of my latest pieces...

ANyhow gr8..

I didnt catch the rhyming pattern until you pointed it out the convo is so deep that I got lost in the words, which is a gr* thing. I care more about content than structure or form.

I too have been dabbling with creating new styles...

Be well My Dear Ren E