She Is My Life
A Poem by
The Lovely Sound Of Crashing
Haiku. <3
Flames embrace my frame.
Her kiss takes away my fear.
This girl is my life...
© 2008 The Lovely Sound Of Crashing
Reviews
so beautiful. It is amazing how someone can capture an emotion and feeling so big in so few lines...
well done!
~Jaz
sorry I have been gone for so long!
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
shows the fire of love that you feel. I don't think many more words could make this simple but wonderful piece any better.
Great Job!
Posted 16 Years Ago
shows the fire of love that you feel. I don't think many more words could make this simple but wonderful piece any better.
Great Job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love when you Haiku...
In 5 7 5 ... You wrote what girls pray to read and hopeto be when they grow up...
I haven't yet but when i do, I want to be like "her"
Scribe on, Ren E
Posted 16 Years Ago
I love when you Haiku...
In 5 7 5 ... You wrote what girls pray to read and hopeto be when they grow up...
I haven't yet but when i do, I want to be like "her"
Scribe on, Ren E
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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The Lovely Sound Of Crashing Miramar, FL
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