She Is My Life

She Is My Life

A Poem by The Lovely Sound Of Crashing
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Haiku. <3

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Flames embrace my frame.
Her kiss takes away my fear.
This girl is my life...

© 2008 The Lovely Sound Of Crashing


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so beautiful. It is amazing how someone can capture an emotion and feeling so big in so few lines...
well done!
~Jaz

sorry I have been gone for so long!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shows the fire of love that you feel. I don't think many more words could make this simple but wonderful piece any better.
Great Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love when you Haiku...
In 5 7 5 ... You wrote what girls pray to read and hopeto be when they grow up...

I haven't yet but when i do, I want to be like "her"

Scribe on, Ren E

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Miramar, FL



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