Need A Hero?

I want to do good things... hmm.

Nail my hands to the wall.
Portray me as a martyr.
Make me a catalyst for the masses,
A new era author.
Give my life meaning,
Let it give others hope!
Even if I die as a man that's broke!
Give me strength to win,
Even if I'm losing.
Let me be the breath of fresh air in a world of pollution!
Let me be the final solution,
But not a failure like Hitler's;
More like a way to find absolution
As told in the scriptures!
I wanna be a fixer,
I wanna be a lifter,
I wanna be anything but a wannabe bitcher!
Don't wanna be richer,
True wealth shouldn't be measured by possession.
I only judge gain by intellectual progression.
Natural selection;
Only the strongest survive,
So give me a way to overcome the flow of society that tries to suck me like a riptide.
Mentally I am growing,
Spiritually I am glowing!
Physically I am suffering; yet strengthening!
Moving my gears to rip off my regrets anchoring!
So let the choir sing,
As I become a hero!
From the ashes I have risen, like the flag from ground zero!

Reviews

[Angela Rose]

I agree, I could totally hear you flowin this too. This is great, more people should focus on wanting to help the world and others rather than helping their pockets. Awesome Ren, I could feel the energy in this keep writin. If you ever stop (don't think you will, I'm just sayin) I will gauge my eyeballs out and mail em to you. :]

[Choosing Life]

Awe...


This lovely... I wish more ppl wanted to a solution and not a problem and no longer a bitcher...

You should record this.. swiftly

I can hear you flowin this..

Gr8 work as usuall Ren

[thecoolone52]

i thought it was good... nice flow on a orginal topic.. you know what they say though... heros always die in the end... hahha nice piece!!

[Wolfwind Words]

If i ever become a prominent elected official, remind me to hire you as my speach writer, or i think that i just wont run lol
Great work of truth!
One Question? When you rise from the ashes, do you get to pick the color of your new suit of armour? :)

[Monners]

I like the way this flows. I could totally hear it in my head as if someone were rapping it. Badass.