I found her!

I found her!

A Poem by The Lovely Sound Of Crashing
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After many relationships gone wrong... I'm pretty sure I found the one. =)

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You know why I love her?
Not just for the physique.
It's gotta be the way the girl speaks.
The way she has wisdom intertwined in her speech.
When she talks to me romantically my knees get weak.
Wait! She also has a sense of humor!
She's sweet and I'm on her like an addicted candy consumer.
She's a charmer; mama would call her a keeper.
Wrestle in the sheets but she don't put me in a sleeper!
She makes me hot like catching a fever,
And I'd have to be a crazy man to leave her!
So when the ex's call me up and try to hook back up,
I tell em, "It's too late, you done fucked up!
I already got someone who is way above the bar,
Sorry, you weren't even CLOSE to the cigar!"
The girl I'm with now has never intentionally hurt me,
Mistakes have happened, but she fixes it like perfect surgery.
You don't even notice the scars;
I wished for happiness and it was granted by the stars...
In the form of a girl,
Who has more worth than any diamond or pearl.
And she's in my possession,
More important than my anime collection!
She keeps life fresh,
Each day is beautiful even if it's really a mess.
She makes everything feel right,
When everything goes wrong.
She's the only reason I actually listen to those cheesy love songs.
And that is the truth,
No one tops my woman when it comes to being sexy and cute!
My eyes ain't even on the models on TV,
I got my dream girl right next to me!
She's my V.I.P.,
My beautiful, goof ball, nerd that's all I need!

© 2008 The Lovely Sound Of Crashing


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Wow she must be related to me due to the last sentence...

I love it Ren. I am happy for you. You deserve the best.

Love ya and the way your pen speaks

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is one of the cutest, sweetest things I've ever read! I loved it, and the last line was such a cincher! : )

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now, thats what i call a world winning dedication!
To express love like that is truly a bond worth keeping
I congratulate you! hooray!
Great Write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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