Incredibly Sugary Poem

I've never thought roses had any scent 
until you gave them to me and
they smelled so sweetly

I've never known I had any feelings
until you came to me and
made me feel so deeply

I've never found the missing piece
until you made me see and
it fits in so neatly

I've never seen love as any good
until you brought it to me and
now I love completely

Reviews

[worlds critic]

That is a very beautiful poem.
Its simple but all lines are so fitting like there is no missing piece

[Wild Rose]

Love it > simple > who ever it has made you see things differntly
A new influnce in your life> Enjoy it

[CD Campbell]

I liked it surprisingly. Fun title, but to look at the poem it has a nice structure. Everything is in it's place and is appealing. You were able to use the end rhyme without it feeling forced. Good job. CD

[Rebecca Leigh]

I love this... it kind of reminded me of what the one munchkin says to dorothy in the Wizard of Oz

[emipoemi]

It's so simplistic.....but so profound. I enjoyed the way it flowed and the narrative it weaved. Well done!