Stargazing

Though miles and miles divide...their love won't be denied.

Stargazing

Writings by Marcello

Just look out your window

When you start feeling alone

Let's stargaze together

Imagine a world all our own

Open up your blinds

Find the north star

Can you see what I see?

I'm suddenly not so far

Envision us upon the beach

Laying side by side

Hands are intertwined

Lost in the crashing of the tide

Though miles and miles divide

Our love can't be denied

We can feel our souls collide

Laws of physics now defied

Anticipation makes us high

Igniting feelings deep inside

Lock your eyes deep into mine

Let them be your trusted guide

We now turn face to face

Our hearts begin to race

Warm you with my tight embrace

Your lips I ache to taste

I can no longer wait 

Gently grab you by your hair 

Slowly pull you in to kiss 

You're suddenly no longer there

Swept by the ocean breeze

Disappearing in thin air

Stargazing once again

Out our windows we both stare

Though it feels unfair

To divide a love so rare

Simply find that star so bright

Knowing I'll always be right there

Reviews

[poetgurl]

So very wonderful and beautiful. I enjoyed this write

[Robert Trakofler]

I can think of no other word than sweet, sweet sentimentality. sweet word usage, sweet cadance, bittersweet longing a familiar feeling! Okay that makes two words bittersweet and sweet both however are sweet and so was this poem!

[tiana hernandez]

That's really good!!!I like that!! Keep it up:)