Paper boat

This is my first writing here, it is about a friendship that promises support for eternity. Well there are some implications though. Anyway, hope you'll enjoy a casual read. :)

The paper boat sails in the river.
Its torso, a sole shade of pure white,
Glimmers above the velvety shining river.
Calm water, may the boat sail forever.

Author's Note

I would love to know what you think about it, I welcome respectful criticism ;D