Booms

This also probably another line that I'm going to have on my book.

I heard a Boom, I flinched and closed my eyes, more and more came along , and at each one I flinched and pressed her finger, it wasn't easy knowing that your dad was out there and there was no way of knowing if he died or not except for the booms, they hurt me , somehow, at each one , I felt something hit me hard in the stomach , anguish ? Curiousness ? I never got to know which one it was.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar and see if there are ways to make it better and etc.

Reviews

[Baban.A.A]

dreadness, anguish , mental pain, these are things people only realize while they are in a sitiuation there is no way back, and forward stands something which is irresistable , Death. well done I liked it

[Dragon]

WOW. . .
My dad was going into the army, but he died first.