Eyes And Ears

This is one of my main quotes of my book , and I made it up at class , when I was writing an essay , and I decided to write it down and remember it.

       I pressed my eyes and ears , trying to not see , I felt my tears , cold and soft they ran down my face , all faces were staring at me , but their sad glances only made me cry...

Author's Note

Tell me what do you guys think and what's good to add maybe

Reviews

[Lobster Goldberg]

I think this is a very good line. Where are you planning on going with this?

[Argo]

On my book actually, I'm making a book about the World War and my dad is going to the war and I don't want to believe that so I try to not to listen or see. I know I am possibly too young for making a book but I really want to :/

[Lobster Goldberg]

You are never too young. At the least you can map out the whole story. Then you will be ready when you have the ability to write it all down

[Dragon]

Never too young. For instance I'm twelve, and I have been writing short stories and comics since I was eight.

[Lobster Goldberg]

That's great!

[Dragon]

Thank you very much. Do you know Tamora Pierce? She was the one that made me want to write my own stories. Every dream I have I write a story about it. . .

[Dragon]

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