I'm done

I’m done; I’m out for the count

I’m done; consider this a f*****g tap out

I’m done; I’m bout to dismount

I’m done; now you can see yourself out

I will take you on a trip that they call memory lane

Lots of s**t to see people flee

I’m running out of sane

Down came the rain while I was in pain

 This heart felt some shame but I still proclaim

An overwhelmed dame lost her mind went insane

 He never came she pushed her blame never again will another flame

I’m done; I’m out for the count

I’m done; consider this a f*****g tap out

I’m done; I’m bout to dismount

I’m done; now you can see yourself out

The problem here only lies with you

 Your fucked up antics your venom spews

There’s only a few who have been in your shoes

That’s not good news you’ve ruined my views

Ill drop some clues but this game you’ll lose

If you clutch your ties like a bottle of booze

Drive classy rides show us what you chose

Who you foolin? I know this abuse

I’m done; I’m out for the count

I’m done; consider this a f*****g tap out

I’m done; I’m bout to dismount

I’m done; now you can see yourself out

Oh no I’m here I’m lookin for you

Lookin for light by seeing evil you do

Shining the light and makin it bright

Struggling and shuffling I'ma win this fight

So back your a*s up

But no need to shut up

I’m trackin and smackin the boys who be up

Up to no good just trollin for goods

playin all tough like he gangsta in da hood

But you aint so tough you aint been cut

You just stand up, act up, make it look like you rough

I’ve seen that s**t in your eyes before

That look of I don’t know what to say for sure

Just save your cries and lies that melt

 You never even cared what I truly felt

I’m laughing now

For something else I’ve found

My own two feet will come and conquer this ground

I’m done; I’m out for the count

I’m done; consider this a f*****g tap out

I’m done; I’m bout to dismount

I’m done; now f****n see yourself out

Author's Note

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Reviews

[N!LoC]

yes! i like to call moments like these... CUTTING THE GRASS ~~~~ .... and so u know.. when ever i feel like im done... i just cut the grass... ( delete my facebook etc)....

[Acer]

"I'm done", tittle is also good, nicely written.

[InsanityWriter]

I actually liked this. :) I could totally see this as a song. Maybe you could put it to music? ^_^ Great job at expressing such intense feelings!! (: