The one

Broken down

Always jerked around

You put me down dear

You threw me down in here

What’s been said and done I WILL NOT be the one

I break you down?

I jerk you around?

Burn your eyes with tears?

Left you here to rot for years?

That’s been said and done but I AM NOT the one

I AM broken down

I AM jerked around

Wake the f**k up you selfish B***H

I’m only here ‘cause YOU had the itch

NOT by my own accord

You shoulda dropped me in a fjord

THIS BEING SAID AND DONE YOU ARE THE F*****G EVIL ONE

 

Reviews

[David the writer]

Wow, not only was the emotion so strong, but the font added a whole new realm of art. It was so angry, and you could tell you were fragile as well as agressive too. Then there's the font. It was so well done. It felt like it was trying to burst through my screen. Great job

[NaugleB]

Thanks so much. I have never done anything like that with the font before so your positive feed back is greatly appreciated!

[David the writer]

Glad I could help!

[Anna]

I like this because that title is deceiving you into thinking its a love poem about the perfect one. You have great lines that I absolutely love! "Burn your eyes with tears, left you here to rot for years" is my favourite by far. Good job

[NaugleB]

Thank you, that was exactly my intent :) I actually wrote this so that I could play with different fonts and emphasize, so I changed it a bit, let me know what you think?

[Anna]

Its interesting. Very abstract and unique. I like it