Go there

I think I might sail away somewhere

Slip away and find something new out there

If you stand in place from day to day

Life can consume you and make you fray

The oceans spray or a winter breeze scent

Wherever your peace is, that’s what I meant

Go there often; it can be day or night

Go there often; life won’t be such a fight

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

You may have reavealed the secret of life.
Explore,
taste adventure,
Sail away before the wind, fight the storms
and lay in the sun.
Great stuff !
----- Eagle Cruagh

[NaugleB]

Thank you!!! I really appreciate the review and now I am off, I need to go there! Have a wonderful day :)

[CharlyeMonroe]

great cadence

[Lucien Maier]

sailing to the greener grass, I like well done.

[NaugleB]

Thank you so much! I very much appreciate your review!

[sithlordjp]

Such creativity, love the feel of spontaneity leaping from these words! :)

[NaugleB]

Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed it, and the feedback is most appreciated :)

[kelvin]

Nice read for one to find there inner or outer peace where ever this place may be. telling us to step back when things get to rough or hard to bare go to you place of peace take a sail away for a bit of time then come back from your mental vacation and see things in a better perspective of handling the situation. Nice inspirational read here as always keep writing fellow writer.

[NaugleB]

Thank you very much :) I tend to get my inspiration to write while I am at work (good and bad hehe) and this really just occured to me as I was having a real rough day. I always thought about my inner peace but not until I wrote it out could I truly find it. Thank you again for your encouragement, and same to you :)

[kelvin]

Yes you can find it its there just waiting for your presence and you're very welcome.

[rnuff]

i just loved those last two lines,
A very well written write.

[NaugleB]

Thank you so much :) This was just a little diddy that popped in my head. I appreciate your feedback!!!