Always Yours

I wish you could hear my heart

As each beat speaks

I wish you could understand my heart

As each beat intends

I wish you would listen to my heart

As each beat screams

I wish you would appreciate my heart

As each beat pleads

I know my heart wants to be with yours

so our hearts beat side by side

I know my heart will always be yours

Until my heart can beat no more

Reviews

[Jay O Gibbs]

Very good

[marie]

the hope and desperation in this is very strong, a little advice change the font in my opinion it detracts from the meaning rather that add to it. but hey its your choice, don't let me interfere if you think it is right

[NaugleB]

Thank you very much! I do appreciate all feedback especially constructive criticism, so thank you again!

[marie]

hey its no problem and i see you took my advice looks great:)

[kelvin]

Very strong pulse of one yearning for the other to just feel the love as they do in ones heart, for love is a powerful thing strong enough to break down wall bore through mountains and so forth. so in depth that I feel your heart as it beats when reading this read here. Very creative read here all one has to do is listen and get on your level to see your heart is yearning to be with them. As always keep writing fellow writer. Very nice expression of the feeling of love and love wanted

[sithlordjp]

Ah, the quiet language of the heart... you speak it fluently I see! A very beautiful piece, great job! :)

[NaugleB]

Thank you so much! Yes, the language of my heart speaks to me very often, it's just finding the strength and ability to actually listen :). Thanks again!