What did you do to me?

What did you do to me?

A Poem by NaugleB
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People bring things out in us that we didn't even know existed.

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What did you do to me, what is happening here?

This heart normally just fills with fear, but it’s different now I can feel peace in here.

What did you do to me, what do you know?

Things within me that never used to show, there’s things about me I never cared to know.

What did you do to me, where should I go?

I want you by my side during this animated show, but you will leave me I understand you have to go.

What did you do to me, where will this lead?

Remember as I speak to you and plant this little seed, I question if we could be together so please take the lead.

© 2012 NaugleB


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This works well as a one sided dialog, but I would love to see you answer yourself in the piece line by line. Good piece its got draw/

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesomeness! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NaugleB

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much!!!!
}Echo{

12 Years Ago

:)
Love it ! keep writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NaugleB

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much, I appreciate the encouragement!

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Added on November 28, 2012
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NaugleB
NaugleB

Fairbanks , AK



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