Show Me by Matt Shapiro

Many look and long for a perfect life in a life with imperfections. Matt Shapiro

SHOW ME by Matt Shapiro

Show me a time that has no end,

Show me place without sorrow, and without sin.

 

Show me wind that blows perfect in each breath,

Show me a place where I drink water that has no death.

 

Show me where an enemy becomes a friend,

 Show me where all sorrow has an end.

 

Show me skies as blue as the ocean,

Show me animal’s filled with love and devotion.

 

Show me a life where rejection is rejected,

Show me a land where all people are protected.

 

Show me a world with love everlasting,

Show me a life where people help others without asking.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This would be a good world. I miss the days when people really talks and had concern for each other. The new age of phones left good conversation and concern for other forgotten. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome :)

[Diane]

I would drop everything and move to this place. Nice work.

[Levi Levin]

I feel the same. Thank you

[Tribias]

This is beautiful, and so well written!

[Levi Levin]

Thank you very much for stopping by.

[Tribias]

No problem!

[Charms]

Very deep and philosophical. Nicely done.

[Levi Levin]

Thanks so much:)

[mhaie]

you works really serves as an inspiration to the readers. Nice transition! :)

[Levi Levin]

Thanks so much. I appreciate that dearly:)

[Mary]

Beautiful write to inspire us to BE the change so that rather we be shown such a world, we live our lives to create such a world in outselves so that it manifests to the Universe

[Levi Levin]

Thank you so much:)

[AYVID N]

"Show me wind that blows perfect in each breath,
Show me a place where I drink water that has no death" - Awesome poetry!

We have to love life...imperfections and all...'tis the only one we have!

And you wrote so well here!

[Levi Levin]

Thank you so much D...:) I appreciate your words:)

[Ama May Cooper]

This would be a truely beautiful sight to see, you have captured the dreams for a better tommorow so perfectly in this piece. The repetition further embedding almost desperation for it. A lovely piece of work. Lovely flow.

[Levi Levin]

Thank you my friend:) I am glad you liked it.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I really like this...a lot of us wish things would be better like this...but in reality we need to learn how to live here and grow before we have this perfect life. That's how i see it anyway.

Great Job

[Levi Levin]

Thank you so much for stopping by. Please come again :)

[silvereyes]

You have expressed the dream most of us have in a beautiful way. Hope we all find it someday :-).

[Levi Levin]

I just noticed this review and that I never replied. I apologize. Thanks for stopping by:)

[saroosh]

OMG!! this is amazing!! especially this one
Show me wind that blows perfect in each breath,
Show me a place where I drink water that has no death.
great job!!

[Levi Levin]

Thank you so much! I feel honored to have you as a reader :)

[saroosh]

and i am so glad to read this kinnda great stuff!!

[Levi Levin]

Thank you my friend :)