Baby it's cold outside..

Now that the chilly weather is creeping in, what better way to stay warm?

Remember that frosty night we sat on the trunk of your car?
The lonely moon stared back at us, glistening with envy.
Your dark hair vanished into the night
and your fair skin shimmered in the darkness.
The chill biting breeze made us tremble,
but the furnaces in our chests kept ablaze.

You brushed my hair back and pulled me in closer,
and your sweet warm breath lingered on my skin.
I felt your gentle kisses move across my face
..then down my neck.
Now this furnace has my whole body burning.
At last, your lips have joined mine in this dance...

Author's Note

I know it is short an I am not really sure about what type of structure I am using. I just wrote what came to my imagination. It is short I know. Hope you can enjoy this!

Reviews

[Jordan Smith]

This is a very well written poem. I really enjoyed this one as it had some good imagery and alot of emotion in it which makes for a very strong piece. Great job Natassha ;)

[zunie frost]

i love winter and the poem is well written ...............