A waterfall of tears

A waterfall of tears

A Poem by Music_Save_Me_From_This

That's all i have done you left me 
Alone with nothing but bitter
Coldness in my heart
I cried and cried and I just 
Can't get you out of my mind
I just kept wondering why 
I had to get my heart broken
Why did I had to leave a warm 
Place for the rain 
A waterfall of tears was
All I could cry 
And each tear hurt 
More than the last 
But just like a fairy tail 
He swooped in 
And carried me to happiness
He consoled me to the 
Point where it didn't hurt to cry 
He brought me back 
To a warmer place to call 
Home 
The happiness I received from him
And all the friends he brought me 
I'm overwhelmed so now 
I'm happy I cried those tears
Because they brought me him 

© 2014 Music_Save_Me_From_This


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So one guy breaks your heart and another repairs it, yes? Usually poems are just about one bad guy or just one good guy but if you bring in two it's a nice balance. I don't get 'leave a warm place for the rain'.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Music_Save_Me_From_This

10 Years Ago

with the guy who broke my heart i felt i was happy and warm with him but wen he left it was like i .. read more
Persona

10 Years Ago

Ah got it.

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Added on July 3, 2014
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i love anime i love to draw i love to write nd im very caring towards others but dont take my kindness for granite i love music more..

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