My mask

My mask

A Poem by Music_Save_Me_From_This

See my smile, it's my mask
In the air, is sulfurous gas

Without you, the air burns
And my stomach, it continues to churn

My eyes, they have a burning pain
A pain, it can only be healed by the rain

I know I'm not the only girl who has eyes for you 
There's too much smoke for you to see through 

The pain I get when i see you with another
I begin to fight the tears but why bother 

You won't see them because of the sulfurous gas
And the tears are hidden behind my smile which is my mask

© 2014 Music_Save_Me_From_This


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Music_Save_Me_From_This
be honest how is it

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This is very potent for how short it is and with very few words you have conveyed so much. Sometimes wanting someone can hurt so much and with out rhyme or reason it will tear you apart. I know this kind of pain and it is unrelenting. This is a beautiful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is very potent for how short it is and with very few words you have conveyed so much. Sometimes wanting someone can hurt so much and with out rhyme or reason it will tear you apart. I know this kind of pain and it is unrelenting. This is a beautiful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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i love anime i love to draw i love to write nd im very caring towards others but dont take my kindness for granite i love music more..

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