He saw me cry when others couldn't

help can come from anywhere

He saw me cry 

Yet he held me tight

He saw me fall

But yelled for me to fight on 

Even though most guys would've helped

He tried to make me strong and left 

Me where I wept 

he came back and helped me up 

And told me to never give up 

I understood what he said 

And was glad he didn't leave me for dead

He saw me cry when others couldn't see

he looked into my eyes ans saw the real me 

Author's Note

what do you think

Reviews

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I like the last stanza, flows so well.