Lovers Lust

Lovers Lust

A Poem by Desiree
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A poem of tragedy and despair

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Lets remember when I begged you to be mine.

Let's go back to red wine.

Infinite sorrows were all that we trailed,

Leaving us broken and shocked until we thought we couldn't prevail.


I loved you with the reddest of love

You grieved me like the loss of a shrub

We was now I

and I was now done

What is this web we have spun?


I forgive,

You curse and shout

I let you in,

You just pushed me out


My billows of fabric fall past my waist

don't look now,

i must hesitate

Your love is a spell I cannot break

It won't leave me be

my soul you do take


tears on the floor and lust on my lips

all that is left of you is prints on my hips

tell the torturous memories screaming your name

that it is time for them to be cast from me

a shallow corpse emotionless I remain


So my dear wave to me from the cliff

Before I jump

deep and swiftly into the abyss

© 2015 Desiree


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Desiree
Enjoy, any feed back is welcome.

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Those of us who have Loved the Reddest love can relate to, and feel every word you've eloquently written.
Happy writing my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Gee
As Melissa so rightly said many will relate.
Nicely written

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hello! I run an Instagram account that promotes the work of others, I am in love with this piece and was wondering if I’d be able to post it *you will be credited of course*

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree

7 Years Ago

I am sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you. That would be fine with me. Please send me yo.. read more
Thank you very much Melissa!! I appreciate the feed back :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good job. Very heartbreaking and many people can probably relate. Nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 12, 2015
Last Updated on September 12, 2015
Tags: #love, #lust, #loss

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Desiree
Desiree

Oshkosh, WI



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