Slow walk nowhere

Slow walk nowhere

A Poem by Nathenial C. Burchall
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Limbo Thinking

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Every once and awhile

I go nowhere

A brife moment gone a mile

And end up anywhere

 

No special thoughts to boot

Aimless and mindless wonder

No solutions to take root

No beauty in nature to ponder

 

Just a slow walk nowhere

My mind on easy street

No faces on focus there

Mind in limbo and retreat

 

I go there just to come back

To be renewed somehow

With more power in my attack

Seeds take root after the plow

 

 

 

© 2008 Nathenial C. Burchall


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I REALLY LIKE THIS
I CAN REALLY RELATE TO IT
IT MAKES YOU THINK
YET IT DOESNT TAKE YOU
OUT OF A GREAT STATE
OF MIND
GREAT WRITE
I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE YOUR WORK

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 24, 2008